Under the Moon- Review


I really enjoyed the first 50 or so percent of this book.... and then the rest happened. This could have stopped at the half way area and been an amazing book. It just felt like there was too many ideas and the book didn't want to end. Like there was literally 3 different stories in this one story. It could have ended after the first one and the next 2 things could have been it's own book with things more drawn out and some other things thrown in. Instead our FMC was kidnapped 3 times and there was everyone under the sun trying to make her their mate. It was just...a lot. I felt myself getting exhausted by all that was happening. I just wanted it to end,  meanwhile the beginning was so good! It just could have ended almost 200 pages earlier. 
     The spice used some....interesting wording. Like cavern and manhood. It was very interesting to say the least. It took me out of it at times and it was very... basic. Like it tried but it just wasn't all that.  I gave it a 2.5 out of 5. Overall I gave this book a 2. If it just didn't drag out for as long as it did, I'd give it a higher rating but it just made me continually check what percentage I was at because I was ready for it to be over. I probably would not recommend this book. 

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